Script For The Group

Script

Over the Christmas holiday I worked on the script for our level. I wrote a script that i wanted the player to feel was realistic and what a person in the players position would say. I aimed to make the dialogue touching so the player can really connect because i believe that bad/cheesy dialogue can ruin a story for a player so I kept the script as genuine as possible. I believe the script really portrays what its trying to do and that is to show a man fighting against a Un-holy evil so he can rescue his daughter that he has been desperately trying to do and this is why i hope the player will connect with the script and make the overall game play more enjoyable.

Scene: school entrance the lights are dark.

Player: Something isn't right here theres know one around

(Player walks through doors to see bodies mangled lying on the floor)
player : What happened here ? I must find Bethany
(player finds one of Bethany's books)
player: hmmm this looks like one of Bethany's books i better take it in case it gives me any clues about where she is
(Player picks up book)
player: this book it feels strange to touch
Bethany: DADDY IS THAT YOU ?
player: Bethany is that you h..how are you talking to me
Bethany: Daddy I'm lost i don't know where i am please help me
player:Daddy is going to find you Bethany just tell me where you are and i will be there
Bethany: Its dark daddy i cant see
player: just try to see Bethany try for daddy 
Bethany:.....
Player: BETHANY
Bethany: (strange voice)....It all began in the place of knowledge where all the books lie
player:Bethany what are you talking about ?
player:what did she mean the place of knowledge?
player:hmm my best chance for this is to check the library for clues for Bethany

(Enters Library)
player:ahh this must be the library i should look around
player:(after picking up a dark book) what is wrong with this book i feels its darkness every second i touch it
Bethany:Daddy is that you
player: Bethany where are you
Bethany:(strange voice) go to the place where the language is universal there will be 3 crosses there turn them upside down if you want to find me daddy
player: a language universal....she must be talking about the language of numbers i better find the mathematics room

(Enters the mathematics room)
player:this must be the mathematics room i just need to dins those crosses now
Bethany:(Strange voice) well done father 
player:what....whats wrong with you Bethany that's not you speaking
Bethany:daddy hurry i feel strange
player: i have to find her but where do i go next
Bethany:(strange voice) ahh good question father go to they place where you learn the most about your kind there you will find candles on the floor light them 
player: where i learn the most about our kind what do you mean ?
player: the only other classes around here are science i suppose i should check them for the candles

(Enters science room)
player: ahh there are the candles i should begin to light them 

(Lights candles)
Bethany :(strange voice) ah that's it i feel my power growing more mortal MORE
player: who are you YOU ARE NOT MY DAUGHTER
Bethany:I'm feeling better now daddy you must be closer hurry i love you daddy
player:daddy's coming Bethany i love you too  Bethany
Bethany: go to the basement turn all the crosses upside down like before hurry
player:i better head there now
(Enters basement)
player: this has to be the basement now just have to find those crosses
player: who's the other voice talking to me telling me to do this strange tasks never the less i Will have to continue the voice is the only thing leading me to Bethany
(turns crosses upside down)
Bethany:(strange voice) ahh well done but there is one last task you must complete before you can be given what you desire 
player: so i will get my daughter back if i do this you will let her go ?
Bethany:(strange voice) the door that leads you upstairs is unlocked now go
player: ok but you better not hurt my daughter 

(Walks upstairs)
 player: now what do i do ?
Bethany:(strange voice)there is one last task i require from you human go to the master bedroom and everything will be clear

(enters master bedroom) 
  
player: BETHANY ! can you hear me (begins crying) my little girl I'm so sorry i was too late to save me just please come back to me
player: WHY... why would you kill her 
strange voice: look at her mortal this girl has been here for months she has been dead just as long as the other corpses in the place..... i should know i killed them all
player: but.... she was talking to me 
strange voice:(laughs) i thought it was convincing too
Bethany:(strange voice) help me daddy help me (laughs) i love you daddy (laughs)
player: you're a monster
strange voice: no mortal i am much worse than that but like i said there is one last task i require... a sacrifice 

(Lights blowout)
player:what...what are you doing 
strange voice: what i said i need a sacrifice
player: what...no.. get off me AGHHH
player:(screams)

(silence)

Demon:... welcome to Hell (laughs)